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The stars they shine
down from the sky.
Like molten diamonds,
that float up high.

They gleam from above
and stretch down below..
Reaching the castle;
a gift to bestow

And brushing against,
the cold gray walls;
they conjure a melody,
Made of delicate calls.

These calls will then echo;
As nightfall, it looms.
and whispering voices
depart from their rooms.

The voices will travel,
down stairwells of gloom,
holding their candles
into the next room

And within an old study,
the children do meet;
To share all their stories,
as elders do sleep.

They speak of the dragons,
the swords & the wars;
of courageous battles
filled with fiery roars.

They tell of the forests;
of mountains & streams...
and eight legged creatures,
thought only in dreams.

And once they're exhausted,
and too tired to think;
they go for their candle,
as their eyelids do sink.

And then they will exit
the tired large space..
Return to their chambers;
Gone back with no trace.

Left finally in darkness,
they then close their eyes;
until the next day,
when it's time that they rise.
©2009 ~XxParanoirxX
:iconxxparanoirxx:

Author's Comments

A fantasy piece I wrote a few nights ago. A simple story-like poem, of what children may have done in the far past; perhaps in another world; when imagination was for more important and significant.

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:iconin4itsover:
sweet poem, I like it

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a wisp to wear
a thought to share
come enjoy but
please don't stare
~in4itsover
:iconxxparanoirxx:
Thank you! I've been very drawn into the fantasy genre as of late, so I've been trying to experiment. I think I'm still rusty at it, but I'm working on it.

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Lesions in the brain,
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ThePeoplesPen
:iconin4itsover:
sweet

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a wisp to wear
a thought to share
come enjoy but
please don't stare
~in4itsover
:iconsir-cool:
i really like this although your rhyme scheme fails in one stanza

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:iconxxparanoirxx:
Thank you :). Which stanza sounds odd? I think I know..I probably missed it before.

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Lesions in the brain,
I'm going insane this time

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ThePeoplesPen
:iconsir-cool:
Sleep, and meet...they have flow. but don't rhyme

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:iconxxparanoirxx:
Eek, you're right! I missed that. I'll have to see how I can reword that :p

Thanks! :)

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ThePeoplesPen
:iconsir-cool:
No problem, your pretty talented and for that i think you earn a watch

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Ok, so i write a lot of poetry! but thats not the only thing i do! i also have some digital fan art! but yeah i also hope to get pics on here eventually so please CHECK ME OUT! [link]

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:iconchocolatemilklove:
Beautiful poem! :D
It flows extremely well ^^

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